Wednesday, April 7, 2010



I want to know what you like and what i can change for people to better understand my idea.

This I believe
I believe in having skill. Everyone in the world has a little bit of skill, but probably not as much skill as me. Skill takes practice and skill. One time when I was a kid, Michael Jordan challenged me to a one on one game of basketball. I beat him 11 to 2, but his friends Kobe Bryant and Lebron James came over and Michael told him he won. Then I challenged all three of them and I beat them 11 to 6. They were really amazed by my skill and told many people that I was really bad because they were jealous. It also takes skill because when being smart. I get 100 percent on everything I do. I think it is important to have skill because if you have skill you will be successful. Success is very important and is the key to a great future. The only way you can fail is if you don’t have any skill. If you already failed you can practice and get skill to be successful. If you already have skill and you are successful you need to keep working to be the best. If you are the best then you need to work to stay the best. Therefore, everybody needs skill to be successful. You need skill in everything you do. You need it to be a good person and good at anything you want to be good at. The more skill you have the more successful you are. Everyone can be successful as long as the work hard to get skill. I work hard to get skill and that’s why I beat Michael, Kobe, and Lebron. I used to be nothing but I have taken the time to get skill so that I could be successful and do my best. It takes a long time to be the best. I just didn’t wake up with a lot of skill I just worked harder than my opponents.

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  2. I liked how you used athletes to show skill. It's a good comparison to show how much skill you have. I think that you could change how many times you used the word 'skill' in the story. Or did you mean to do that? I was kind of confused. I did enjoy this piece, though. I believe it has a lot of voice and shows what kind of person the writer is. -The Red Writer

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  3. I really like this post because I have a lot of skill. I am almost a god at what I do and it is all skill. So coming from a veteran skill guy, this is a very important thing to have because you can't be very good without skill.

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